Thanks for posting the 'pre PDF receiving' toucans..
They both look good as birds in general or starting points for other bird species.
The first one kinda reminds me of a puffin. Probably because of the position of the beak coming out of the head.
I found that Toucans (plural Touci? ... terribly bad dutch joke) have the top of their beaks just one eye-length higher than the eye itself. Your second version has more bulk higher than the eye-line, which may look less toucany (...) but does have a nice bird appearance as well. Potential for another bird species perhaps...