As you guys may know I am in the process of combining my businesses to come under a single name - Loony Balloony.

Due to an awful lot of commitments and drama's going on at the moment I have had to put my plans of completely redesigning my website on hold for a while but did need to get everything on the one site and functional which I have now done.

Anyone who has visited my site will see the design has not changed at all (this will come later) but that I have added all the face painting side of things along with revamping the galleries.

I would be really grateful if people could have a little look to see if there are any typo's, broken links and to check the photo's all load up properly and quickly.  I have only checked my site in Firefox so far so you any other browsers and encounter problems (or in fact if you don't) would you mind posting to let me know.

Many thanks ladies and gents  

Call me nit-picking but the first thing i would comment on is

Minimum age for Balloon Modelling: 2 years old

Followed immediately by

Balloon modelling is perfect for children of all ages

What do you do with children under 2 years? I know some people give away the thicker double dipped balloons or a small toy for these children, maybe use that to your advantage? Maybe tell them what you offer in these scenarios?

As for your pictures they seem to be fine, although image 19 is massive in comparrison to all the rest when clicked on.

Pete

Thanks for the heads up on the oversized pic.  Not sure what happened there as everything should have been the same size ... never mind they now are!  As for the text - I see your point but at present cannot think of another way to phrase it.

With the under 2's I don't do anything for them and to date that has not been an issue.  Also at this present moment in time I cannot afford the time nor the money to add something else into my business to cater for the ones too little to participate in anything else as I am desperately trying to find the time to set up the décor side  :shock:

Hi Yvonne, how about something like,

Balloon Modelling
Max of 40 Children for a 2 hour party

Balloon modelling is perfect for children of all ages* and can be booked on it's own or with face painting depending on numbers invited and duration of the party.

Also what better way to attract people to your shop, product launch or trade stand.  Balloon modelling is a bright and entertaining way to draw customers into your store and are completely portable so can be inside, outside or both.

Please note that I do make balloon weapons, if requested, so if you would rather I did not please make this clear when booking. I am always happy to honour parents wishes in this regard.

* Loony Balloony are interested in your child's safety at all times, as such we advise that balloon models are not handed to children under 2 years of age.

Perfect.  Can you tell I hate writing the scrip for websites ... well magazine articles too for that matter!

I understand completely, i spend a large amount of time re-writing stuff for our website at work, and come home from that more exhausted then i would if i had been moving stock all day.

Pete